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the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

0 posted 2004-01-07 01:13 AM

When I look at you
I'm filled with anxiety
But I speak with you anyways
Your voice is so soothing
My heart is warmed for that brief second of passion
And i'm addicted to that rush of emotion
And I keep coming back for more
But, my heart will never be filled
Until you love me back and we are together
Even though I know that might not happen
I keep trying
That hope will always exist
And I will keep coming back

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-07 11:17 AM

"HUNGER"

take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

2 posted 2004-01-07 02:59 PM

I really like this, and i have so many thoughts going through my head on what i think you should call it. im going through all these ideas. something like 'sorrows kiss' or 'tomorrows wish' i dont know, these are the ones that pop out the most, and its from how i took your poem. i can relate to that, and i have written many poems on a subject similar. so maybe something like 'Sweet Desire' or something beautiful, that explains your poem in the title, but doesnt give it away. do you know what i mean. well. thats all i have, good luck!!

moonguardian2004
Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

3 posted 2004-01-07 08:14 PM

This post meant so much to me, because I totally know what you are feeling. I was the same way with my last bf. What about forever passion or hopeful love.

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

morgansmiles
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 25
hicksville

4 posted 2004-01-07 10:03 PM

"Longing"

-morgan

the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

5 posted 2004-01-07 10:05 PM

Thanks for the cool names and comments. You have made me more confident on sharing my poetry with others.

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

6 posted 2004-02-01 12:13 PM

yeah think about what ur gonna name it... it'll come to you.

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