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the_fortress Junior Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 28 |
Sinking deep into the song Trying to find the real meaning But the meaning I may never know The authors emotions were confused As are mine The music will help me get over problems Simple or complicated Music is always there It’s never busy or uncaring It can be depended on Through the thick and thin The best thing about it Is that no matter what decision I make It won’t think of me differently It won’t judge me Or make fun of me for the things I do wrong With it, there is always hope Thank you music |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
music is always there. i like this one. keep it up |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
I think that you described the meaning of music perfectly. It is always there and never judges you. It's helped me through times. Great job expressing yourself! ~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~ |
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the_fortress Junior Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 28 |
What can I say, maybe I am good at poetry...What is it about artists and their thoughts of their own work being stupid or pointless? Strange...thats all i can say. |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
This has talent, it's been really well thought about. It shows the meaning of music, what it's really there for. I'd never really thought that much about it. |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
sometimes in life i doubt the purpose behind love, and hate, and crime, and satisfaction. but just turn on a song, and listen to the beats, and feel the words, its an amazing feeling. like a wind washed soul. everything is just taken away. i like it. i've read this poem about 5 times. so i thought i'd give ya another comment. good work chicky. keep it up. |
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