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Teen Poetry #7

Let's Take The Stairs

SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2004-01-05 10:13 PM

You follow her
And the tear in the dress
Up three flights of stairs
And you start to think
Life isn't so good anymore.
Foreign poisons flow
Through your body
Not sure you can make it
To the staircase's summit
And you start to think
This hasn't been love for days now.
You reach the top
But you have already given up
The fabric from her dress
Lays on the landing
And you start to think
Everything will fall apart.

*Belabebeautiful*

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since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-01-06 11:52 PM

very interesting, very unique, I liked it, kind of sad but an interesting way of viewing things...stairs, just never would have thought of that before. Thats one of the things I love about poetry! thanks for the read.
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the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

2 posted 2004-01-07 12:02 PM

Ah, the many thoughts of walking up stairs. Very origonal poem. Tough to express but you did very well.

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