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muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-01-03 04:04 PM

For My Grandparents
by Ashley Allin

For every grandparent
There is a grandchild
The loving is sweet
And ever so mild
If you give them a hug
They’ll hug you right back
They’ll tuck you in snug
And give you a snack
They’ll be there for always
And flash you a smile
Even on their worst days
Which makes it worth while
They always have candy
And grandma’s ever so neat
Grandpa’s always so handy
And smell’s so darn sweet
For every grandparent
There is a grandchild
I’ll love you for always
From your grandchild

Love Always
Ashley

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2004-01-03 06:11 PM

I really liked this, I can relate to it because that's how my grandparents are but I also know some people who don't have that kind of grandparents. This was a really sweet tribute to your grandparent, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~You can close your eyes to things that you don’t want to see, but you can’t close your heart to things you don’t want to feel~

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-01-03 07:27 PM

it was very sweet. good work. it flowed very smoothly.
-alex

BWriter22
New Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 4

3 posted 2004-01-03 11:01 PM

I like it alot... it rhymed gr8 and went smooth, good work!! _Bryan V_

the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

4 posted 2004-01-04 03:13 AM

You can tell the work that went into that. It even seems like a professional wrote it. I enjoyed it a lot.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-01-04 09:15 AM

very well written,,,and so very sweet,,,,it's good to know grandparents are so loved,,,,my son adores his grammy,,,,,and you put it very well as to why,,,,,
take care
looking forward to more from you
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

6 posted 2004-01-04 06:23 PM

Very great and sincere right hun! Keep up the great work. We all can relate to how special our grandparents can be.

Love,
Chris

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