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The Death of a Friendship
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The Death of a Friendship |
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luckydre23 New Member
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3Colorado, US |
The Death of a Friendship Friends, Sharing secrets and spreading laughter, Contagious smiles and endless hugs. Nothing and no one could ever come in-between, Or that’s what they think. Enemies, Distributing glares and fabricating rumors, Infectious hatred and never-ending anger. Something and someone did come in-between, And no one can change that now. Strangers, No feelings, no emotions, no cares. Too much has gone on to overlook, But they try to forget anyway. No eye contact, no acknowledgement, no thoughts, Nothing. What happened to this friendship? All can’t be forgotten, Too much has been said and done. Bittersweet memories flood the mind, And the heart drops. Not anything can breathe life into what is now… Deceased. [This message has been edited by luckydre23 (12-30-2003 12:10 PM).] |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
i really like your poetry, and i like how it doesnt rhyme!! have you ever wrote a poem that did rhyme? i think if it came from you it would be awesome, you should do one in the future on womanism or self destructing attitudes. i dont know it would be interesting to read. thats all i have to say keep up the good work |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
wow.now that got me thinking.what if all those deep friendships that one thinks is unshakeable ends up like that?but if this was based on a true story,dont let the friendship just die like that.try to revive it.a very good poem! |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
yes a frienship ending is always a low and sad spot in our lives, very painfull. I liked the way you described this piece as if you were walking us through a story in a kind of abstract way, nicely done! ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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