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indra_babygirl New Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 2 |
Hey everybody sorry this might not be very good im kind of just starting out.. This one is for my boyfriend who lives really far away.. Sshh you are my seceret Keep your voice down As I whisper i love you in your ear Be quiet or my parents will hear! They can't know or they'll keep us apart It will tear up both our hearts You live so far away baby But our time will come someday In two years school will be done Then we can go out and have some fun We'll start a family of our own There will be a place that we can call home Someday we will tell them That we are teenagers in love And the distance won't be a problem They will have no control Over the strength of our hearts pull And we will be forever Best friends that became lovers |
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DaNi:H Junior Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 21South Carolina, USA |
awww thats sweet. hope it works out for yall. that was pretty good... but im actually just starting out too... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
first off welcome to piptalk! secondly nicely done first post, I escpecailly enjoyed the ending line about best friends becoming lovers thats the way it should always be in my mind! Look for a little welcome note in your email! ~live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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