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Teen Poetry #7

Now I See

Anti-Social_05
New Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 1

0 posted 2003-12-27 06:15 PM

As we lay close in bed,
I see all of the reasons I'm attracted to you
The way your eyes tease me
The way your smile shows me you love me
They way your arms surround me like a bear hug.

When I look at you I see why I love you.
The way you smile makes me smile too
The way your eyes seem to look right into my brain
The way your hand fits mine like it does.

Now I see all of the reason why I hate you.
The way your laugh seems to mock me
The way your smile is full of sarcasim
The way you eyes can look into mine and not feel a thing.

[This message has been edited by Anti-Social_05 (12-27-2003 06:16 PM).]

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2003-12-28 08:18 PM

That sounds exactly like something i would write! I can truthfully say that is one of the best poems i have ever read, probly cuz i can relate completely, but ya know whatever! lol I hope to hear more!
~kissa~

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

2 posted 2003-12-28 08:22 PM

I can relate to this exactly! Very well written, Good job! I loved this, probably becuz it reminded me of things that I went thru...But its good all the same!

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

3 posted 2003-12-28 11:55 PM

welcome to pip, I hope you have a most pleasant stay! Nicely done first post Love hate relationships arn't they great..sigh...very much enjoyed and very well done. Look for a note in your email!
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

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