Teen Poetry #7 |
(When the Hard Times Come) Come Running to My Side |
Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
Here's something I've been working on...I know I'm new here, but I wanted to post this anyway. You want a heart that's strong and true I'm glad to give you mine You don't want to give too much away I'll try to walk that line I'll do my best to heal old hurts There's no better task I'll find the strength you've locked away The only thing I ask Is come to me when you need someone Is that so hard to learn? You know I want to be right there If your worries should return I'll be your winter haven A place where you can hide When the hard times come Come running to my side You worry that I'll hurt you Don't want to have me near Trust me and I'll prove to you There's nothing you should fear It may take some getting used to I'll try to take it slow I won't go further than you want But I want you to know You can come to me when you need a friend If there's any strength you lack I'll be there to help you stand If your hurts ever come back You'll have a part with me A place you can abide When the hard times come Come running to my side I’ll do all that is needed To help you on your way Let my love surround you You know I’m here to stay Don’t worry that I’ll harm you I’ll do all the good I’ve planned Fall back into my shelter You need to understand If clouds should burst upon you I'll shield you from the rain If troubles should surround you I'll try to ease your pain And every ache you're feeling In me you can confide When the hard times come Come running to my side. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Welcome to pip! Excellent first post!! It reminds me of me and a friend of mine, I have trust issues . I loved the poem, very sweet, thank you for sharing. W.W. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
oh wow...beautiful sweet poem. I adored every line such honesty and emotion..I was just swept away. Welcome to piptalk, I hope you have a long warm and welcome stay. Incredible first post I'm just blown away... ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less ~Bella~ [This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (12-27-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
please if you dont keep posting here...you have to keep writing poetry. You have such a talent Or you know just email me with oyur latest! It was awesome! I'm bookmarking that one! (L) (L) xoxLORxox |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
really really nice poem..... keep up with the writing..... you have excelent talent and are natural..... none of the words seemed to be forced into how the poem turned out..... really nice work... keep up on the writing.. just be true to yourself and the words will follow...... Mel |
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