Teen Poetry #7 |
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RedDiamond1307 Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 20 |
People don't talk to me because I look like a Bitch. In their minds I seem to be, the one to easily switch. People don't understand cause I'm not like the rest. I won't take your hand cause I'll be the best. Don't need a man to stand behind, cause everyone ran when they seen I had a mind. Sorry I'm not what you need, Sorry I don't hide what I feel, Sorry I take the lead, Sorry I refuse to just deal..... |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
i appreciate this poem from girl to girl. i think a lot of people out there are superficial. but what can ya do eh. and being you and standing up for you and being an individual and strong and independent. its great. good qualities. thats what i got from this. good write |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
hi firST OF ALL...listen dont even think about what they think if u know urself u would'nt care soo listen just be the best and love urself .....even if u were one ......be thankful no matter how hard and difficult it could hurt ...because people these dayz are not qorth it...listen just read my poems u would understand what i mean,..... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I'm taking for granted,,,where this is posted, that you are a teen,,,,very good to see such a strong view so young,,,I'll be 33 soon (ugh), and, I've had this same attitude, for many yeasr,,,,,welcome to passions,,,,,take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was really good i'll keep lookin for ur posts |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
*scoots around the estrogen and slips in the door* oh, hey guys! IM MALE! but i still think it was good. I hate guys who dont want girls with brains... cause i cant stand it any other way.. i dont understand guys... lol.. or girls.. im so so very alone... good write Paublo Escabar International Jewel Thief |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
First off... Welcome to passions!!! This poem is awesome in all senses of the word. It shows strength and courage and individuality. Most people will hide who they are in order to accepted in a strangers eyes but your not scared and thats an incredible quality you should never loose. I wish i was more like you in that way. Great poem and i cant wait to read more from you in the future!! P.S.- Check your e-mail for a special greeting Standing on the edge of the world |
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RedDiamond1307 Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 20 |
Thanks...I really don't like this poem... I think it was one of my poor ones... but I was just speaking what was on my mind... I'm sick of girls who stand behind their man... I stand beside mine... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
You go girl! I cant stand it when girls let their guys push them around, and hide behind them! It just gives guys more power, and that is one thing they really dont need!~lol~ Great poem. I could really feel ya! ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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