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Placing the blame
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Placing the blame |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
I used to be fascinated by everything you stood for I'd hang on to every word that came from your lips. I'd smile at the right times and became your pawn in ways I'd laugh at your wittiness even live my life around the things that you'd say. To me, you were a god I put you on that pedastool I'd look up to you for guidance for an answer, for a solution but all I ever got was emptiness. When you'd kiss me, I'd shiver your touch alone was enough to make me want to surrender. Yes your love was a dangerous one but of course, I did not know it then. Life was confusing to me full of twists and turns times where I'd feel let down I'd run into your open arms. Hoping for a sign from you I'd wait for you to say the words nights I spent in your arms but never did you reciprocate half of what I was feeling down deep inside. Thats when you started to fall into a path of worlds unknown you became a stranger to me once tender, now so cold. The light that shined around you only seemed so dim now the aura that used to glow died along with the rest of you. I don't know what happened that day but it changed you forever. Was it my fault for thinking that you were someone you weren't? Was it my fault for acting like you were perfect? I know everyone makes mistakes but when you started to act like you were, thats when I started to realize. That all the things you said were lies and those dreams you had were just that. Just dreams, just dreams in your head. You never intended on a future with me I was just another girl, any girl to you. Sometimes when I see your face now I can't believe how naive I was but then when you meet my eyes and your smile lights up the room, I feel a familiar pang in my stomache and I remember everything you once stood for. You could have been great, you know you could have made it in life but you chose to go the other way. I guess I can't keep blaming you but sometimes I'd really like to try. |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I really liked it, it was long but it kept me reading til the end, so it must have been good, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Yeah, a lot of people act like something they aren't and it's really hard to find that out. But don't blame yourself--no one's perfect, and we tend to be harder on ourselves more than we would be on another person. Very well done!  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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