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What A Happy Day
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What A Happy Day |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
Okie dokie ... this poem was just made up as a joke but I thought I would share anyways. This was posted before in another forum but I would like your opinions anyways. Lollipops and gumdrops Sugarplums and dums dums Tiptoe through the tulips Sipping on mint juleps Watching the sunset Spinning in circles Looking above At all the pretty doves What a happy day Rolling through the pansies Singing kumbaya Sparkles in the sky Make me feel alive Gazing at the lava lamps Makes me wonder why What can I do? When all this time passes by What a happy day When I find the courage, I will embrace you. When I find the strength, I will erase you. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Joke poems can turn out nicely. This one was kinda sweet and whimsical. I liked it!  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
Thanks for your reply. It's much appreciated. Much love, Akie When I find the courage, I will embrace you. When I find the strength, I will erase you. |
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