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High school contest |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny 
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hey everyone i need your help i am entering a poem into a college contest for the best high school poerty and i was wondering if you could help me out and tell me which one you think i should enter thanks here they are 1. So much pain hidden within So much anger waiting to be released Why do these things hurt so badly All i ever wanted was to be free But yet something kept me from going I want to know why it’s me What have i done wrong I feel the pain inside taking over But one light comes through to break the pain Family is the one thing worth while Family is what breaks the pain My family there when i need them Now i can finally see an end to the pain I feel the spirit within lifting The pain is going, but yet always stays Stays dormant in my mind, soul, and heart But its ok i feel the need to move on And finally It has been broken the curse of Life 2. People always say they will change But when does it really happen? People want to change the way they went through high school But they are never wise enough to figure this out when in high school People on always want to change their lives Sitting on their death bed thinking about what they would have done different Why should we think about what we could have done different? Why not just do it differently? Why not sit on our death bed and say: I have lived a good life People don’t now what life is anymore They loose every meaning in life Just sit back and change your life, just live and don’t get so caught up in problems Don’t look for the easy way out Look at the simpler things in life and enjoy them Sit on your death bed and say: It’s time for me to go. just put down 1 or 2 thanks A person will sometimes devote all his life to the development of one part of his body - the wishbone |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
hmmm...I would definitly have to go with 2, I wasn't feeling the first one to much but the second one got to me, excpecailly the last line, well done. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
ok thanks |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
I'd have to say 2 as well.  College holding a high school poetry contest, hmm.. It wouldn't happen to be for a 24th annual one at Rider University in Lawrenceville New Jersey, would it? That's the one I just entered  If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (12-12-2003 04:35 PM).] |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
nope its for UB they have done it for a couple of years i think i read so guess they are everywhere |
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