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Love Poem To Friend |
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jdog44life New Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 2Cleveland OH U.S.A. |
Ok people this is my first time posting! I'm going to give this poem to this girl I like on Friday. Please tell me what you think! You are probably reading this while you sit Listening to somebody, and eating a cheez-it I should’ve given this to you back in high school I was just too scared, and now I realize I was a fool I just didn’t know what to write It plagued me, I was up night after night But now my mind is free and clear To express my feelings, I have no fear I first met you in drama class We worked together, and would finish fast Then we went to Theology class, oh what a bore! We learned about sexual integrity, and why not to be a whore Finally in May, we graduated together I thought I would never see you again, ever! Weeks went by, and it was time for the first day of college I went to study, and maybe gain some knowledge I was kind of dreading going back to school I would’ve rather gone swimming, or shoot some pool But then I walked into English class, and there you were Beautiful, just like in high school, I thought I was dreaming for sure! The days have come and gone so quickly And now I realize, ever so sickly That time is running out Now I must tell you what I’m all about I’d rather come out and say what I need to say Instead of waiting another hellish day You are the most beautiful girl I have ever met There is no one better, I’m willing to place a bet You brown eyes are soulful and caring Your sense of humor is witty, and daring You are a wonderful actress, I’m not being funny You could give Catherine Bell from J.A.G., a run for her money! I have never seen you play baseball, but I don’t need to inquire You can hit more home runs than Mark McGuire Whenever I’m having a bad and stressful day I just think of your bright, warm smile, and the pain goes away I know that I’m boring, shy, and that I don’t talk a lot But there are tons of other great qualities that I got This poem has been a long time coming But now, I finally have the courage to ask you something All I’m asking for is one little chance To go out on a date, maybe we can go to a dance We could go o the movies, or even to a play We could even take a walk in the park, and won’t have to pay You might not want to be friends after this We won’t wait for each other and talk, that I will miss The time I have spent with you has been cool But if I had not said this, I would be a fool So, I will ask you this, and I’ll let you be Would you like to go out with me? |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
Awww..I thought this was adorable! Parts of it made me laugh, which I think was the point of certain lines.  She'll be a fool not to say yes..good luck! |
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