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changes arent always good
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changes arent always good |
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wishing on a star Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 19sleeping in my warm bed =) |
it seems like everyone is changing and im staying the same everyone is moving on and im gettin left out of the game everyone is growing up but im still a young child everyone is so different i wanna be crazy & wild ................................ i regret those thoughts from way back then i wish i were smarter and wiser too but now i think and act different i realize I miss that child i once knew i wish i could reverse everything an go back and savor my childhood you can never go back and change it no matter how much you wish you could here's the deal I wrote the part above the dots when I was about 9 or 10 and Im 15 now I found this poem in my room cleaning it one day and decided to add on and finish it up! lemme know what you think young naive & vulnerable to the world |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
This was moving i feel the same way...im 15 too sometimes i wish i could go back to the younger years but thats life huh ...i feel you* keep up the good work hun! -*-broken627-*- |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
What I wouldn't give to be a teen once more. I just and turned 18 in july... Eh what a tradgedy now there trying to tell me i have to take responsiblity for my actions =P. Nice poem liked it alot! |
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