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Teen Poetry #7

I'm Sorry

Love Angel
Junior Member

since 2003-11-04

Posts 25

0 posted 2003-12-07 03:30 PM

My hearts been broken,
And my hearts been bruised,
But Lord it wouldn't this way,
Had I just listned to you.

So take my heart,
I place it in Your hands,
And here's my whole life too,
Lord, they're Yours to mend.

God, I'm so sorry,
I can't give them to You,
The way You gave them to me.

I'm sorry they're not the way,
That You want them to be,
But do with them what You will.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-12-07 03:56 PM

(smiles) God will always teach forgiveness, dearest friend, He will always help those hearts which are hurt and broken and He shall mend your heart with love and comfort! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-07-2003 03:56 PM).]

Love Angel
Junior Member

since 2003-11-04

Posts 25

2 posted 2003-12-07 03:59 PM

I appreciate your replys and I hope my poetry can be of help to some of you all.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

3 posted 2003-12-08 06:20 PM

Nice write, give it time things might get better, hopefully

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

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