Teen Poetry #7 |
Love Squared |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I want to have my cake and eat it too to walk between the two of them and sleep between the two of them love between the two of them Make me happy, I dare you. Crawl out of your world and into mine, meet and greet him and then decide if you could possibly share the one you love so indefinitely. I'll wear your ring on my finger and only think of you when I see that little glimmer of silver but is it okay if I think of him too? What am I supposed to do- torn between two lovers and I'm not yet ready to make the decision that could generally affect the rest of my existence. Can I date him and still marry you? Or is that unfair to everyone? |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Nice write, I think everyone at one point of their lives is stuck making a decision between 2 things they really love, this poem really illustrates the problem of actually making a decision and not regretting it, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
very good job.. really liked this one. |
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