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Teen Poetry #7

December Morning

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-12-04 02:34 PM

Black, gray and white, like a daily paper,
carelessly crumpled, and thrown to the street,
the sky was reflected in the cold, puddled pavement.
People stepped on the clouds with negligent feet.

This December morning was strangely enigmatic.
The hoary haze veiled trees, bushes and benches.
Like some lunatic lover, passionate and fanatic,
the wind kissed the downcast faces of strangers.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2003-12-04 02:40 PM

I haven't seen you around here for a while, or perhaps I've just been looking in the wrong places.

This was an interesting read, Master. It forced me to think of the world, of the streets filled with people, in a new and interesting way.

Nice to read your work again.

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