Teen Poetry #7 |
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The WInd (Jealousy) |
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morgansmiles Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 25hicksville |
Jealousy hits me Like the wind switching tide Like the rain to the ground And all control is lost Only strength can endure it The ache in my head It makes me scream I want to make them feel my pain To hear my cries And take all of my pressure On to their own lives If only I could show them The way I am going to die If I could take the torturous and constant heartache That fills my own soul And pour it out into them Then when the wind blew I wouldn’t be the only one who felt it |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Morgan, Another great poem! I knew you could do it...haha. Seriously this is a good poem... keep writing chica... and don't let the whole "crush" scene... "crush" you. Love ya, Nets |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Great emotions. nice job. |
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