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pleas that are too true

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-12-02 05:36 PM

pleas that are too true

since i hide away in fear,
please come and find me.
this is my plea to all who hear,
i need a saviour.

since i hold my thoughts inside,
please come and tear them open.
i need someone that i can confide,
will you be there to listen?

tis is how i project my scream,
but do you believe it?
im coming undone at my seems,
will you put me together?

these sectrets i cover from all,
i wish to bring into the open.
is there any answer my call,
or am i the one to be alone again?

im tired of lonliness knowing
me better than anyone else.
i need to find ones who's growing
a friend to be there till the end.

who will answer my plea?
will you......?

now im alone, but not lonely like before

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-12-02 05:41 PM

I went through this a couple years ago, now I found my best friend and am much happier than if I had stayed with my other group of friends, from what I can remember this is exactly how I felt. Nice write

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2003-12-02 06:23 PM

Awesome poem, very touching! If you ever wanna talk you can get my email from my profile! I'll be here!
~**kissa~**

duncan idaho
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

3 posted 2003-12-02 08:43 PM

this was a perfect use of stanzas. you're writing some top notch poetry. keep it up.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-12-03 06:16 PM

Wow, this is my favorite of yours. It almost brought some tears, I can relate to it soo well. Amazing, beautiful, deep piece.
Thank you so much for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

[This message has been edited by WinterWren (12-03-2003 06:30 PM).]

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