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GP3B30B, my exodus
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GP3B30B, my exodus |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
Basic Design Principles High, Lighter Feel me .com all myself to bloody optiplex. Understand, recognize, help, envy them. You have me posted to a unifiedshredded sole of a newly balanced rotation within service tag GP3B30B. I abhore youthemwe. I choked on Your compationate knives. but I still see you LITER when time collapses and nothing is left but the moment then the moment is plastic wiring...truly nothing yes, Nothing is anoying but deal with it. Lighter, Higher. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
"the moment is plastic wiring" I really enjoy your creative approach. it makes sense, and makes a point, while being far from cliche. It is my goal in writing to steer as far away from cliches as possible, although I'm not perfect. It's good to see some originality. Does the GP3B30B stand for anything, or is it just random numbers and letters. Just curious... |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
it is the tag number for the computer i'm using in my classroom. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
nice. |
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rhyme time Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 13 |
you should actually write a poem and not just words that make no sense |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
i'll do that........... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I think you have a lot to say, you're just terrible at saying it. |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
hmmm, maybe i'll just write something that really shows my stupidity! |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
wait....i've already done that... |
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