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I Can :: Remember |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
I can’t remember The last time I cried The last time I was found The last time I died I can’t remember The last time I walked away The last time I needed The last time I wanted to stay I can’t remember The last time I was caught The last time I strained to think The last time my mind was shot But I can remember The last time I was told they care The last time they didn’t worry The last time they didn’t need to be there I can remember The last time I stood still The last time I wanted The last time I said “I will” I can remember The last time I was blamed The last time I found I knife The last time I was maimed when you live you begin to die |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
wow....this was great, really really good. wow....this is the best thing i have read from you.. awesome aweseom poem. -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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Ally Stone Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48D.C. |
YES,I definitely agree with young blood on this. Good job, keep it up! |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
oooh nice job |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
WOW! Thats like all I can think of to say. Very very nice! **~kissa~** |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
um, I'm not particularly fond. So perhaps I shouldn't have responded. but, it is just so repeative. it's almost boring. I'm not saying what you have to say is boring, just the way you presented it is a bit weak. Expand on your feelings instead of just stating them. maybe |
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