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Teen Poetry #7

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SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-09-28 09:49 PM

He wrote red ink letters
      from dark and distant places
Bleeding words:
   tragedy turned picturesque.
   (violent vignettes
         addressed to the sender)

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2003-09-28 10:21 PM

very nice. i like it alot. i think the shortness just added to it.

sixington
Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 53
Utah

2 posted 2003-09-29 08:06 PM

That is amazing... you put so much into so few lines... this is going in my library. Props to you.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-09-30 03:33 AM

Woah, this is so amazing! A true work of art. This is, in my opinion, perfect.

And it's going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-09-30 10:21 AM

I totally loved this. Normally short poems really don't thrill me a whole lot, but this one was really good. Thanks for the read.

"To handle yourself, use your head; to handle others, use your heart." -Donald Laird

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-10-23 05:02 PM

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