Teen Poetry #7 |
Succesful Hurter |
buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
i just realized what we had was fake when you said "i love you baby" it was for your boredom's sake. you had not had fun] in oh so very long a while and innocent me you saw and fufilled your thoughts, though vile. poor me, i think now sad and hurt realizing now though i don't want to you were such a jerk. you hurt my very gut not to mention broke my heart i thought you loved me, and i loved you back from the very start but it was a lie just like you i never though i'd say this but i never had a clue i though i was in love, finally too. and you knew you were succesfully tricking me you knew it, didn't you? |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I really like this.. so many girls can probably relate to the kind of guy that is munipulative.. great write.. ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i can relate to this in a way... but i liked this it made sense to write it and the title drew me in good post... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thank you heather & hunnie! i am really glad y'all replied. -missy |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yes, I agree that many girls can relate to this -- I know I can! Keep writing, I enjoyed this. ~Alli~ |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thanks alot alli=) |
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