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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
you read my thoughts, you read my pain, you told everyone like acid rain, you made me out to be a fool, my deepest poem you've shown, one i didn't want my mom to have known, you told my plan to leave, off to the big city, now all i feel for you is pity, you didn't know they already knew, i told them i was leaving, but i didn't, i hated watching their greiving, so tell me again, why you want remorse, i'm not giving anything i have to force, so why i want you gone, is nothing to ask, leave me alone let this be your last task, to me your out of my life, and i hope you know it's true, i really hate you. A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
sounds like you've got a lot on your mind. Great write. just keep your own head when it comes to making big decisions. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
sounds like this is full of emotion. i hate people like that who people tell secrets and show them stuff and then the person just tells the world. the good thing is those people normallz end up ruining themselves. i know a girl like that and after a while everybody actually talked toghether and figured out that she was starting rumours and stuff and now no body will tell her anything and alot of people hate her good write, but if there out of ur life , u can probaly ignore them and dont try and get revenge , they will probaly fall on their face of their own doing. and believe me revenge when they are out of ur life often backfires. rhia |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
hmmm, interesting write hunnie. it does sound like lots is on your mind. i hope you aren't to troubled. . you'll get your answers soon enough. Let them go, and when they do, think of the things they've done. . .for you thought i'd reply in rhyme. muchos amo amigo -missy<3 |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thanks y'all yea i guess i do have a lot on my mind... the bad think is the person is in my life he's my mom's boyfriend  but the good thing is i can ignore most of what he does. thanks for replying everyone  ....hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yep, a very emotional write. I hope everything is alright for you now.  ~Alli~ |
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