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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-08-25 12:55 PM

i always held on
to little things
you said to me
that would make me happy

but few they are
its hard to please
this broken heart with
i know, i've tried, trust me.

i almost wanna ask
for just one more nice word
but i realized now
no more should i hurt

you've had me where you've wanted me
so let me free
now, ok?
i promise it'll be better
for both of us,
so say goodbye, again, to me.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-08-25 04:02 PM

WOW.

I love this....

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2006-08-25 04:51 PM

you do? thank you so much! i thought this was the worst of the other ones i just posted but i guess not! thanks alot SEA!

~missy

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2006-08-25 05:16 PM

truly, yes.

I understand the emotions of this...or can for sure relate it to my own.

buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

4 posted 2006-08-26 09:33 AM

you are right, this is probably the strongest one when it comes to the emotions..

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-08-27 12:20 PM

i liked this too a lot of emotion too good write

hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

6 posted 2006-08-27 10:35 AM

thank you hunnie!

the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

7 posted 2006-08-27 10:39 PM

wow.. this was amazing.. i loved it.. especially the end..

great great great write..

going in my library..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

8 posted 2006-08-28 10:00 AM

thank you so much heather! im really glad y'all like it so much! i didn't expect such great replies!=)

muchos amo amigos
-missy<3

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2006-09-03 07:58 PM

Excellent, excellent write! I loved this one by you!

~Alli~

Sweetpali08
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since 2006-05-07

Posts 40

10 posted 2007-03-28 04:04 PM

beautifulllllllll...

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

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