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Why do I still Care?
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Why do I still Care? |
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Abiola Junior Member
since 2006-08-09
Posts 29 |
How is it that you are always on my mind Even when i try to look the other way? How is it that after all that has happen i still wanna cry, smile, and love u Though i still want u out of my life? Why do i still pretend i don't have feelings for u When u and i both know i care about u deeply? Why does my heart keep pushing me backwards to you When I want to move forward? Is this a sign because I always see you And you are in my heart? People may say what's wrong with you, why do you still talk to him after all that has happen? Am i to say? I guess i want us to start over Or maybe i'm just stupid and making a mistake all over again I don't know what's going on but i know i'm so caught up with you in my life I wanna make this right but i don't know what to do Honestly i see me with you but then again i can't and won't let it happen... I can't believe i'm thinking about u right now Your touch, your smell, your smile, your kiss Just every thing about you How do i make this right? How do i let all of this pass by? How do i move on or am i? How do i stop thinking about u or am i suppose to? I just wanna know how all of this should end!!! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Abiola, Great poem! I think this one is my favorite out of anything I've seen you write so far, just because I can relate better to this one than the others... "Why does my heart keep pushing me backwards to you When I want to move forward? Is this a sign because I always see you And you are in my heart?" My favorite part^^ The pushing backwards when you want to move forwards is a neat way of phrasing this part of the poem. I thought you did an excellent job with that... Thanks for sharing!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
"Why does my heart keep pushing me backwards to you, When I want to move forward?" I loved that part. This poem hit a soft spot for me cause everything you described I'm going through right now. Sometimes it's hard to let go of someone, esp for me it is when I don't know if they'll hold on anyways. But yeah, I think that's the reason I liked this, it was extremely honest as to something I can totally relate to. You did an amazing job capturing that. myspace username-beautiful_tragidy |
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Midnight_Daze New Member
since 2007-01-08
Posts 2 |
This is exactly how i felt/ feel with my ex. It hit home. Great job |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
HEY THIS IS HOW I FEEL EVERYDAY. I DIDN'T HAVE A FAVORITE STANZA CAUSE THEY ALL WERE SO DIFFERENT BUT UNIQUE. THANKS FOR SHARING... |
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