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Teen Poetry #7

Falling up into Love

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

0 posted 2003-11-29 02:09 PM

for Kieran

Falling up into the sky
Looking for that bright white light
Like a moth to a flame
a moth to a flame

Don't you see that we could be
As in love as Cupid and Psyche
As i look at your sweet face
I die a thousand wondeful deaths

If this is heaven let me stay
And I'll love you day after day
If this is hell... so be it
Let me burn forever

I give you my number when you sad you call me i make you happy- "Don't Worry Be Happy"

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-11-29 02:42 PM

I really liked this one.. a beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing!

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-11-30 03:07 AM

The last stanza did it for me..I know that feeling well. Nicely done.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2003-11-30 10:31 PM

I liked the last stanza too. Especially these lines "If this is hell, so be it, let me burn forever." Good job.

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

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