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Cruel Fire
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Cruel Fire |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I was reading about some of the situations in the world in some countries and it is so unjust. the corrupt goverments tearing each other apart and sending fighters with bombs land mines other explosives out to kill the other ones, and they end up hurting the people more than anything else. i finished reading it and decided it all deserved a Poem. A dropped match Summers dried grass lighting an outburst of fire flames springing ever so higher blazing free,running wild with the control of a child burning everything in its path catching the town unaware, a bloodbath in early hours of dawn fire strikes,when help comes the houses gone erupting in flames,the wood burns unable to find a way out,thru twists and turns people trapped deep inside wrong instincts,they try to hide they meet their doom way too soon outside the wreckage,the perpatrators stand smirking, proud of their horrors,man to man rows of battle hardened blood lusting rebels these deaths won't matter,they'll just get drunk be bitter their fight is to maim and destroy setting land mines looking like toys where kids play,while their parents forage to keep them alive a wide eyed toddler picks it up,and begins to cry as it explodes in their bare hands the rebels act like they're conquering lands in truth their fight isn't brave nor noble for too many children actually its fatal this cruelty is a raging fire consuming crooks,swindelers and liars normal who used to be good people of the street now haunted with whats left of their broken dreams so heartwrenching, the stories kids working in mines,quarries its this way in each place all exists this racism and hate just tears my heart wish i could help a disease a burning desire to let out own pain in Cruel Fire. [This message has been edited by rhia_5779 (08-19-2006 12:03 PM).] |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
That's so said,but true. I hate this world that we live in. It is so cruel. I liked this part mostly blazing free,running wild with the control of a child burning everything in its path catching the town unaware, a bloodbath It just caught my eye. I liked this poem only b/c it's really true. You did a nice job writing this as well. I hope to see more in the future. |
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