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Teen Poetry #7

My Angel

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

0 posted 2006-08-19 02:05 AM

As the eyes of an angel
Stare at me with devotion
And all in an instant
I am lost in the notion
Of you being mine

As the lips of an angel
Come closer to me
I stand there in silence
I now understand you hold the key
To my heart, to my happiness

As of now you are my angel
My love will never end
I know you will protect me
You also are my best friend
A soul that could not be replaced

You will always be my angel
As you call out my name
Knowing I’ll be there to save you
And I needed you, you came
Together, though joy and through pain

As the eyes of an angel
Still stare back at me
I know now and forever
That you will always be
My angel

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-08-19 08:09 AM

awww that's so cute...and nice. I would pick out the parts that I like but the whole poem I liked. So very good job I liked it alot.

tapper798
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

2 posted 2006-08-20 02:12 PM

I think I wrote a poem titled this. :]

I liked yours much better than my own. lol keep it up.

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I just want to find my way back to you...where love is strong and feels brand new.

stargal
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since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-08-21 05:54 PM

A very beautiful and sweet poem! I liked it a bunch. It was a pleasurable poem to read, instead of being dark and gloomy it was kind of "uplifting" to read, made me smile!

Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

4 posted 2006-08-22 03:04 PM

thanks for the commments!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2006-09-04 11:05 PM

Delightful poem...just beautiful.
Keep posting!

~Alli~

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