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cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-08-10 06:24 PM

It's a rainy day today.
Not outside, but inside me.
i watch people go by.
I feel trapped, I want to be free!
I'd love to be you.
You don't even know what I'm going through.
I feel like I'm gonna crash,
into a pile of trash.
Have you ever had nothing to say?
I have never ever got my way.
Welcome to my rainy day.
I'm not sure if you would get thhis one, But I'm DEPRESSED once again. so tell me what you think. and I'll get back with you guys later.

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-08-11 12:58 PM

sorry you're depressed. sad poem

sorry that sounds bad.

sorry you hafta go through that...i do really feel bad.

nice job on the poem although it was a bit confusing i mean i could tell you were sad but it was just a bit confsing no offense...

anyways...yeah.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-08-11 04:16 PM

thanks it was a little confusing for me, but then again I am the one that wrote it and it should make since. well at least it makes since to me. but I'm just glad you read it.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-08-12 02:07 AM

Hi Cherrys_rule,

Sounds like you are going through some rough stages in your life at the moment... Just remember if you ever need to vent or just talk there's always someone on pip willing to listen...

I agree that the poem is kind of confusing but it does get the emotions across to the reader. Which, in my book, is one of the main points in writing a poem...

I hope things improve for you soon and I'd love to know how you are doing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

4 posted 2006-08-13 07:59 PM

Thanks for your comment stargal... I have actually talked to some of my friends that have lightened my day, but I only get depressed on some occasions and I guess that was one. so yeah... but thatx for caring so much.

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