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Abiola
Junior Member

since 2006-08-09

Posts 29

0 posted 2006-08-09 02:11 AM

She losted a lot

She losted what she cared for or thought she cared for

Was she too infacinated to notice what just happen or

had happen?

Did she miss the most important part of that?

She did cause she went on and on with it

It was great/ one of the most wonderful things she ever

wanted.........

But as she knew once again she knew she losted a lot

She knew and know now she will never get wat she

losted

B/c some thing else found u be4 she could

Losted is one of the most hardest thing u ever want

But as the saying goes......" A person lost is another

person gain"

But wat did she gain? A heart filled with pain, a river

filled with tears, an emotion stain? wat is it?

She losted what she wanted

She's never going to have wat she losted

All she has is hurt, tears, and sadness that will last 4

long

But it's all good 2 her

Life lesson is wat she learned.....

But y do she feel so bad?

She thinks it was her fault. She feels so stupid for what

happen

She never wanted no one or herself to get hurt

If only she remember the most important part but she

was to infacinated to listen......

What can she do now but move on

The saddest thing, she still wants wat she losted but

she will never get it!!!!!!!!

Abiola Adekahunsi

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-08-09 02:19 AM

Hi Abiola,

WElcome to piptalk! It's always nice to see a new face with new poems around here. I hope you enjoy the site

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
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bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

2 posted 2006-08-11 12:44 PM

hey welcome to pip. there was a lot of emotion in this and thats a good thing in poetry...umm just a word of advice, losted isnt a word ; ) lost is the past tense of lost. But its okay.

hope to see you 'round pip

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

3 posted 2006-08-11 11:07 AM

Hey man whats goin on? People are always going to tell you about the grammar and crap like that. Well to me it is(im not trying to hurt feelings...i just dont use good grammar)LOL! So anyways welcome to pip, hope you like it, and by the way very good piece. It had alot of good emotion. It was very unique.

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