gotta take chances cause you can

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Teen Poetry #7

gotta take chances cause you can

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2006-08-06 07:13 AM

i wrote this on the plane on tuesday, everyone was asleep.
i dont think it is my best, but i think it is so -so. i have written better def. though.

flying to foreign land
just gotta take chances cause you can
soaring through the cool night air
i look out the window without a care

going to live for a year
done crying,no more tears
whats happened,happened no buts
time to listen,and see instead of fuss

up so high,nothing can touch me
looking out,darkened sky all i can see
,and flickers and pinpoints of light
'reminds me of memories, here so bright

but after awhile in time
memories fade,out the window they fly
yes, it is so sad but truly its life
looking at the shadow of my home, I say goodbye

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-08-09 09:31 PM

that was a nice poem wasnt one of my favorites mby you but it was good. where are you going? hope you have fun too.
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2006-08-10 10:51 AM

im in italy, now.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-08-11 08:38 PM

All the way across the states wow!
I also hope you have fun there as well.
this poem was really good. Well I thought it was. I hope to see more from you over seas.

~Courtney~

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