Teen Poetry #7 |
gotta take chances cause you can |
rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i wrote this on the plane on tuesday, everyone was asleep. i dont think it is my best, but i think it is so -so. i have written better def. though. flying to foreign land just gotta take chances cause you can soaring through the cool night air i look out the window without a care going to live for a year done crying,no more tears whats happened,happened no buts time to listen,and see instead of fuss up so high,nothing can touch me looking out,darkened sky all i can see ,and flickers and pinpoints of light 'reminds me of memories, here so bright but after awhile in time memories fade,out the window they fly yes, it is so sad but truly its life looking at the shadow of my home, I say goodbye |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
that was a nice poem wasnt one of my favorites mby you but it was good. where are you going? hope you have fun too. Krysti* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
im in italy, now. |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
All the way across the states wow! I also hope you have fun there as well. this poem was really good. Well I thought it was. I hope to see more from you over seas. ~Courtney~ |
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