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synthetic Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 70ontario, canada |
To me I’ve written and written Still there’s something missing Pain, anger, hate-I’ve rid myself of the above But I just can’t really explain my love This time I’m really trying to explain how I feel No lies, fake compliments-it’s all for real We’re changing, I’m changing I’m going through a transformation One that I don’t completely understand But I don’t worry because I know you got my hand Already these few lines Feels like I’ve emptied my mind But I know that my heart still has something to say And I just need to find that special way To express my love and it’s depth And the incredible feeling I get with every single breath My mother, father, my brothers I love them to death It’s weird to say, but now I place you above them and the rest Usually I think then write-but now I write then think So hopefully from mine to yours I can make a link I truly believe that between us there’s a bond One that’ll make us go back and beyond As I’m writing I realize that I can’t really explain My love for you, writing these words is sort of in vain What they mean to me, might not be the same for you I write like I’m forced to, but really I choose Because the comfort it brings me is so unreal Makes me grasp the concept of how much you mean Everything in this world to me |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow... I'm ... speechless! I loved this poem, all of it, no favorite spots, nothing. It's all amazing to me, all relatable for me. I can't even put into words how much I like this poem. I'm astounded by how wonderful I felt this poem to be; you are one awesome writer. This poem is going into my library as of now. Thank you so much for sharing, I can’t wait to read more poems by you  @-->--- |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Wonderful poem.. one of your best that I've read.. GREAT JOB  ~heather ps-going in my library Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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