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pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-08-02 09:11 AM

Another year
Another trial
Laced with hardships, doubts, and foes
Another year
Another blessing
An ending story- yet on and on it goes

More to be faced
More to expect
A new me
Is what they'll get

And if that new me
Isn't that great
I'll make a new one
I won't deal with hate

The real me however
Will be there still
Peaking out
When she has the will

You'll never make me
Completely different
That fake me
Is nonexistent

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2006-08-02 03:52 PM

This is seriously wonderful. How I remember these feelings. Well, okay I barely remember but still I can recall. Hope you keep on keepin' on and write your heart out.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

2 posted 2006-08-02 05:12 PM

WOW! This is awesome, very powerful. Good job!

When I stopped trying to find the right guy, and concentrated on being the right girl, the right guy found me.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-08-03 01:08 AM

Yikes! I loved the ending in this, the last stanza said it all. Plus it was unique, it wasn't what I was expecting to happen. I love that kind of ending, it's a nice suprise!

This is one of my favorites by you! Thanks for sharing

@-->---

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

4 posted 2006-08-03 01:05 PM

i love it. its definitely good to not conform to peoples standards. be yourself- and if they dont like it, their loss.
Great write. a very much enjoyable read

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

5 posted 2006-08-10 06:50 PM

So MUCH ATTITUDE I LOVED IT!!! GOOD JOB.
I hope to see lots more from you.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2006-08-11 05:15 PM

wow that was amazing it really flowed and showed a lot of feeling.....
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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