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brokenheart15 New Member
since 2005-12-16
Posts 5indiana |
I dont know how to tell you that you hold the key to my heart and i hope to God on everything that we never part from the first time we met you took my breath away and i love you more and more each and every day you are the best thing thats ever been in my life and maybe someday i will be your wife but until that day keep your promises true that you'll never leave me and i'll never leave you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Samantha~ Think of titles as the doormat that welcomes a visitor in~ Within your poetic words there is a title waiting for you to place it thusly, so that others will come in and visit your poetry~ What does your heart say it should be ? That's probably the best place to find one for this lovely penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Hi, you probly don't know me and that's okay. But I think you should name it " I'll never lose you" But hey It's your poem so I think you should really listen to what your heart has to say. Plus Your poem is really good. i hope to see more from you. ~Trapped in this thing called life~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Well… I’m not very good with titles but I was thinking something like “promises”… Great poem Samantha! One of my favorites by you I’m sure. The rhythm was simply amazing in this, plus the wording kept you reading more and more. Nothing was wasted and I love that. Thanks for sharing!  @-->--- |
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