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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
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Laughing yet crying over the sadness of our friend going off to college we stand behind the car and watch her leave After she is gone I look to you and kinda wave and then go home the next day i hear about a plane crash It was sad but i thought nothing of it the day after that i got the news YOU, Tiesha, were in that plane YOU, Tiesha, died in the mountains of maine We didn't even get a proper goodbye Why'd you hafta go on that plane Tiesha, friend, I understand That God has plans through this You know, your parents came to church the following Sunday and got saved That was because of you So sad but so true Tiesha everyone misses you How could you be gone I love you girl and i'll see you in Heaven RIP Tiesha Loesberg one of my good friends Died in a plane crash last thursday... she is missed my many... this isnt a normal work by me... I just needed to get it out of me |
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well it's amazing...I'm so sorry for your loss.  |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
TY : ) |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i thought it was really good, and sad. I can relate to it really well, my best friend died when i was five and actually i remember ever moment of those times. i understood what was going on. and my friend and i were fighting and wernt speaking, and it was spring break and she went off, and we hadnts spoken, and she died over spring break. im sorry about your friend, this may not help, but sometimes stuff like this happens, and it is horrible, but years later something may occur because this happen, and the changes may not be all bad. i left my old school after i couldnt take it anymore, and i would def had stayed if my (deceased) best friend was still alive, i met some amazing people, who are now my bests friends, and i have some of the best friends i have ever had. Bekahlekah , may not seem like it but, you will b able to get on with life, you just might not ever forget, the best thing for you friend is to remember her and have others do the same!!!!!! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i thought it was really good, and sad. I can relate to it really well, my best friend died when i was five and actually i remember ever moment of those times. i understood what was going on. and my friend and i were fighting and wernt speaking, and it was spring break and she went off, and we hadnts spoken, and she died over spring break. im sorry about your friend, this may not help, but sometimes stuff like this happens, and it is horrible, but years later something may occur because this happen, and the changes may not be all bad. i left my old school after i couldnt take it anymore, and i would def had stayed if my (deceased) best friend was still alive, i met some amazing people, who are now my bests friends, and i have some of the best friends i have ever had. Bekahlekah , may not seem like it but, you will b able to get on with life, you just might not ever forget, the best thing for you friend is to remember her and have others do the same!!!!!! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i thought it was really good, and sad. I can relate to it really well, my best friend died when i was five and actually i remember ever moment of those times. i understood what was going on. and my friend and i were fighting and wernt speaking, and it was spring break and she went off, and we hadnts spoken, and she died over spring break. i |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
m sorry about your friend, this may not help, but sometimes stuff like this happens, and it is horrible, but years later something may occur because this happen, and the changes may not be all bad. i left my old school after i couldnt take it anymore, and i would def had stayed if my (deceased) best friend was still alive, i met some amazing people, who are now my bests friends, and i have some of the best friends i have ever had. Bekahlekah , may not seem like it but, you will b able to get on with life, you just might not ever forget, the best thing for you friend is to remember her and have others do the same!!!!!! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
bekahlekah , this was really good, meaningful, sad . i liked it. I am sorry about this tragedy, i know how it feels to lose a friend, you dont ever get over it, believe me i know. my best friend died when i was five, it wasnt any worse or any better because i was young. i understood what was going on, we were fighting before spring break, and we were celebrating a holiday, and we had stopped fighting, but we were busy, and i never got to say Good bye, she died over spring break. YOUR FRIEND WOULD BE PROUD OF YOU , BECAUSE OF THE POEM. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
bekahlekah , this was really good, meaningful, sad . i liked it. I am sorry , i know how it feels to lose a friend,it hurts like nothing else, my best friend died when i was five, wasnt any worse or any better because i was young, understood what was going on, over spring break she died i never said good bye. YOUR FRIEND WOULD BE PROUD OF YOU , BECAUSE OF THE POEM. a |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
bekahlekah , this was really good, meaningful, sad . i liked it. I am sorry , i know how it feels to lose a friend,it hurts like nothing else, my best friend died when i was five, over spring break she died i never said good bye. YOUR FRIEND WOULD BE PROUD OF YOU , BECAUSE OF THE POEM. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
this was really good, sad and meaningful. i can relate, my best friend died when i was five , and i never got to say goddbye. i havent ever forgotten. its not easy to go through,to lose a friend. your friend would be proud that you wrote that poem for her. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
it was really good. sad and meaning ful. i can relate to losing a friend. YOUR FRIEND WOULD BE PROUD OF YOU FOR WRITING THIS FOR HER. |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thanks : ) |
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John O'Driscoll Junior Member
since 2006-03-13
Posts 43Sandy, Utah |
ouch thats rough. I had three friends die in car accidents last year and it was a terrible experience. But from your poem, i can see that your not letting it control you. I recall the words of Liam Neeson. Sometimes you wish that the person you loved had never existed so you could be spared your pain. But the thing is you'll always have memories. That which does not kill us makes us stronger! YOU ROCK!!! great write!!! Love Always John True happiness is found after you think you have irretrievably lost it |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
Thanks John. I'm sorry to hear about your loss of 3 friends. Its hard. but i know shes in a better place so it gives me hope. I'll see her again. : ) |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
whoa it posted multiple times. sorry i couldnt get it to post earlier , i didnt realize it had posted, sorry. |
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