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Teen Poetry #7

Weep not

Artofmark
Junior Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 41

0 posted 2006-07-14 11:30 AM

For what is thou weeping
today is saddest of days
But why are thou weeping
for my love has met his end of days
For your love you are weeping?
yes for my love i held dear;
Weep not for she is just sleeping
weep not for your love is still here
For i know what thou is seeking
your love will be together, have not fear
For your love thou is weeping.

M e m o r i e s
Junior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 14
Alaska, USA

1 posted 2006-07-15 08:37 PM

Awwww! This was sweet! And cute! And sssaaaddd! *sniffles* *hands tissue for person weeping*

I like that you wrote like Shakespear! That was cool, your the first person I've seen do that! Yay! You gets a cookie! *hands you cookie*

oh_my_goshijustgotexcited
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 52
USA, IDAHO

2 posted 2006-07-15 08:39 PM

yes the older writing style..."thou and stuff" was very different, i thought it was interesting i liked it, very good write it showed a lot of emotion.
great job

Viola

Artofmark
Junior Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 41

3 posted 2006-07-18 11:46 AM

yea i thought it would be neat to write as they did back in the day, actaully I enjoy wrting like that quite a bit.

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