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Likeing 2 people at the same time can be hard...
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Likeing 2 people at the same time can be hard... |
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BlackEyedBueaty07 Junior Member
since 2006-04-05
Posts 27rittman, ohio |
JUST STARTED I really love you But I like him too It’s so confusing Yet so clear to the eye I can see the better path now Its just so hard to let go of someone you really like Have so much in common But then you look at the person you love And realize you need to stay with them Not leave them for some other person I just need to get away from him, forget about him But how when I see him every day chorus How much I like him I cant let you go I cant let him go But I have to Can’t ruin another great relationship I'm still learning from my mistakes It’s just so hard since I just started I look at the ground Realizing what I said To you, it was wrong Me and him weren't going to be a good couple, and you know that, and I should've too But me and you could last forever I couldn't last forever in his arms We have so much in common But at the same time we do not repeat chorus Learning from my past Learning for the future I just need to get out of here Why'd you have to come into my life? Is this a sign of me doing wrong? I this my punishment? What did I do wrong to have someone else in my life that I adore? How could you when you knew? repeat chorus God, is this a punishment for my sins? What did I do to be here? In this situation, help me understand why you put me here Why now? repeat chorus So hard So hard I just started Learning from my past Learning for the future Need help Need understanding Two people I adore But I can only have one... repeat chorus **THIS IS ABOUT ME AND HOW I LIKE TWO DIFFERENT GUYS, ITS REALLY HARD, EVEN WHEN YOU DO KNOW WICH ONE TO CHOOSE...** SONG ** |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Well, I know that I usually always critique something, but this one I won’t… The reason being is I’m going through the same stuff right now, and it’s hard, I can understand where you are coming from on this song. My favorite thing in this though, or at least I believe that it’s my favorite, would be the chorus. For me this is how I feel, so many mixed up emotions, and it being hard. I think you captured that and put it into words perfectly… Anyway, I know it’s been awhile since I last saw you post so I’m hoping everything is going okay with you, and that you will continue to write/post online so everyone can see your amazing work  @-->--- |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
I thought this was really good, I'm very impressed! Not long ago I was in the exact same situation .. it is extremley difficult but you get through it. Would love to read more so please keep writing ! belinda x |
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