Teen Poetry #7 |
The Moonlight's Glow |
The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
The Moonlight's Glow On a moonlite midnight,a storm brewed outside And dancing in this down pour was a surprising silohette For an untamed spirit was just released from an unlocked soul the extroverted spirit that was hidden deep inside This free spirited girl usually restrained on a leash Its' rope around her throat that had choked out this energy was unbound with a yell that lightened her load the weight of her heart that she had bore all this time And as the music in her head played on a loop she twirled in a circle and sang her lementing song finally releasing her pent up emotions she cried out in joy as she fell to the grass As she lay on the ground a jovial sigh escaped her lips letting herself go she relaxed her body and mind and as the moisture soaked into her skin she became whole and complete once again But when the rain died down and the sun rose again she tightened up and hid back into her shell thus appearing to be her former self forever the shy one, invisible to all [This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (06-18-2006 11:17 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
cool write had me spinning and its ok to be shy |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
You know it is kind of funny that you said that because I've learned that you can't change who you are and conform to what people want you to be. And actually if I wasn't my shy self I wouldn't have got into poetry in the first place, so I guess I'll take it. /\/The Editing Queen\/\ It's strange that words are so inadequate. Yet, like the asthmatic struggling for breath, so the lover must struggle for wo [This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (06-19-2006 12:02 AM).] |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
nice : ) and good point you made in the comment about not conforming to what other people want you to be. thats absolutely right. If people won't accept you for who you really are, they wouldnt have been very good anyways. and also their loss! okay well im not talkin : ) |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
Those are great images to capture those feelings. I can definitely relate! |
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spaz02 Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 74USA |
This was nice..i could invision it...i liked it... Where'd ya go, I miss ya so, seems like its been forever since you've been gone. |
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