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Teen Poetry #7

Awaken From Her Slumber

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-11-25 09:06 PM

The mistress wanders around in the depths of her dark dungeon,
Broken shackles fallen to the ground,
Letting her lost soul find it's way home,
Liberated from her hell,
The ebon of nothing left behind,
A forgotten past it soon will be,
Walking away from the hopelessness she possessed,
Finding herself, her inner spirit,
Now her soul has found it's home,
Truth of relflection,
The mistress is living in her dark dungeon no longer.

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2003-11-25 09:31 PM

hmmm...it was pretty good. i liked it, the only thing i didnt like was that near the end it didnt really tell anymore, to me it just ended very quickly....but still a good one.
-alex

now im alone, but not lonely like before

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-25 11:22 PM

yes....freed she seems.

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