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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Out cast Unwanted, forgotten, alone, it all means the same Kind, said to be a friend, only in name Out cast, They say, you will have friends, though it never lasts While everyone fights for attention, one other lost in the background From some they won’t shut up, from me barely a sound Outcast For short whiles, I am liked, but each time it will pass From few kindness, from others scorn, to others just something to ignore For a while I am interesting, but it goes, forgotten what I’m there for Outcast, My world, here and there moving fast Always I am different, I strive to be me The others, ignore being unique, doomed not to know who they could be Outcast, all alone Fate to never be accepted, to never fit in, unknown I can’t ever get close, have to break away, Friendships hard to believe that they might stay Outcast, hurt, scared Being my friend hard to believe others might have cared Some of me believes, the rest thinks it sees That there absolutely no chance, destiny will again bring me down Outcast, afraid it will all be fake It all will be over; again no one will keep up for my sake That's all I have been, all I am, exile I can't fight it, I'll never get out, Outcast, scared to get up after each bout Torn up inside, pushed over edge, feels vile I scare my self, at times Even in my misery I go over the line Outcast, wondering if it’s worth being around still A choice is considered; from it I get a chill I have in the past, Given it a chance, though as a resort it’s always my last Outcast, worried, of my life going out of control, running away Every time I’ve thought it, my life’s chaos, disarray I’ve always refused, to steep that low Push on those who know me, that hurt, that woe Outcast, I know what I’ve done; now I’m not so sure Do I want to anymore, my memories endure For a little while, memories don’t hurt, not there As they are not, such instances so rare Outcast, those remembrances always come back All time so far, defended against each attack In the aftermath weakens my resolves, lowers my will I think I can keep going, not stop, my emotions not spill Outcast, that’s not what I ask, but this, Does anyone want me to? To keep being here, does anyone, do you? |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
wow, this is sad!! but good. if you know what i mean by that. |
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loveislove Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59USA |
wow...powerful...it really speaks to me, me being an outcast, i used to feel this way, but yeah, really good poetry, i noticed you had to fudge some of the rhymes but other than that its awesome "when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join them in a mutual weirdness and call it love-true love" |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
"While everyone fights for attention, one other lost in the background From some they won’t shut up, from me barely a sound" I liked this part. This was sad but definitly full of emotion. Keep it up! <3Erin myspace username-beautiful_tragidy |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
i really liked this poem, i used to feel that way. so i can really relate. Great Job! ~Broken_Smile~ |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
wow! i love this poem! i can very much relate to it. i feel that way almost all the time.... Great Poem!! |
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Fuschia Junior Member
since 2006-06-19
Posts 35England |
Fantastic poem. I really relate to it and it conveys the emotions so well. It was all good but i particually liked the following stanzas: While everyone fights for attention, one other lost in the background From some they won’t shut up, from me barely a sound Outcast For short whiles, I am liked, but each time it will pass Always I am different, I strive to be me The others, ignore being unique, doomed not to know who they could be Outcast, all alone Fate to never be accepted, to never fit in, unknown xxFuschiaxx |
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