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TheCoolestKidYouKnow
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 11


0 posted 2006-06-09 11:00 PM



Tears on my pillow everynight,
Every problem is onebig fight.
So many tears, so many nights,
But nobody knows these fights i fight.

I want to be free, get out, be happy,
But my life's problems just wont let me.

My antidote you wonder what?
My friends, they're my life, they're what i got.
So goodbye tears, goodbye fights,
My friends are here, no more lonely nights


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bekahlekah45
Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

1 posted 2006-06-09 11:02 PM


I LOVE YOU DANIELLE! hahaha
we're awesome

good job : )

bekah

[This message has been edited by bekahlekah45 (06-10-2006 10:35 AM).]

TheCoolestKidYouKnow
Junior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 11

2 posted 2006-06-09 11:04 PM


your just jealous!!! hahah love ya too
~danni

bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

3 posted 2006-06-09 11:06 PM


omg how could you think im jealous! i'm apaulled!  lmbo

[This message has been edited by bekahlekah45 (06-10-2006 10:35 AM).]

bekahlekah45
Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

4 posted 2006-06-10 10:36 AM


Hey I dont think people like us too much...
oh well.  the only one id consider a friend is stargal.  but i dont think shes mad?  i hope not anyways
Ummm well k im done talkin now

bekah

stargal
Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
5 posted 2006-06-10 06:40 PM


Hey TheCoolestKidYouKnow,

Nice first post, I enjoyed it a lot and I can relate to it...

Also welcome to pip! I hope you like it... And when it's possible again, i'd like to see more of your writings

As always
Stargal

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