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Love Is Like a Game
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Love Is Like a Game |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
Love is not right... We always get in a fight... our mind is playing a foolish game... Being with you was so lame... It was all a shame... That your mother said stop playing games... In the end we won are fame... Of this foolish game we played... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey, I think i like this one better than the other one i just read. Just one thing on it, are you saying you won your fame for being a player, or am i missing something once again? Sorry, yes, i'm really stupid at times... The poem has a neat general idea that I can enjoy and relate too, plus your words add a unique twist i might say... Thanks for sharing once again! @-->--- |
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