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Face in the Mirror
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Face in the Mirror |
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Foreverone8783 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 24Illinios |
Staring at myself, but is it really me Everything is so blurry, it's hard to see Everythings changing, nothings the same I'm completly different, except for my name I look into the glass, then look away Who I see in the mirror is hard to say It looks like me, but then again not The differences are not hard to spot Why isn't my face the same reflection Is something trying to get my attention Am I just changing with the day Or is it that I am fading away Is the face in the mirror just a lie I feel the tears, but the reflection wont cry So angry with the face that I'm seeing I punch the mirror till my hand is bleeding The shattered pieces on the floor They wont lie to me anymore The faces in the pieces are now just me But can I fix myself for the world to see *^*Ashley*^* |
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savmoree New Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 3mississippi |
that was so good!!! i loved your poem. |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
amzing. i LOVE it...it flows perfectly. and i can relate completely...great write. ~L |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey foreveron8783, Awesome poem, it's like... me? lol I can relate to this in so many ways, and than again I can't, it's slightly confusing. I really enjoyed this though, it was very good, well written, and, when you first start reading this, it sort of draws you into reading more. For me at least it does that, i'm not sure about everyone else though. Great write on this one, i hope to see more from you soon!  @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
*stands and applauds* I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg. GREAT JOB!! that was amazing... |
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Foreverone8783 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 24Illinios |
You guys are so sweet, thank you! |
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