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Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 123
Mesa, Az

0 posted 2006-05-23 09:40 PM



Dread the open sore that festers

Deny the answer that questions

Free your mind of the betrayal of your tongue

Feeling the words only in my heart

Isn’t good enough for anyone

It’s my cry that is unsung

My lips can move in a way that makes this world

Rest on its heels

My mouth can crumple

It’s what I feel that is infinite in explanation

It’s the notion of meaning in your voice

I find no comforts there

Only a hidden condescending tone

You call it what you want I call it what is..."ours"

My heart has ached for months but

You’ve been knocking on others doors

Looking for something you have

Change is inevitable

In just one syllable you can turn my world upside down

Leave me weak on the ground

I drown in my sorrow for what?

I ask now

Is my sanity

A sacrifice for what?

I ask now

I never introduced my self umm so here I’m Fabiani and I love poetry I think it unifies us all and is also the sole way that I relieve my worries and woes its where I pour my heart haha

<3

Aim-DuWerdestBrachen
MSN- Tooshaysalesmen@hotmail.com

Yup YuP~

© Copyright 2006 Jose Luis Fabiani Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sweetpali08
Junior Member
since 2006-05-07
Posts 40

1 posted 2006-05-24 12:22 PM


This poem is amazing.
I loved it with passion.
Nice meeting yea

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

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