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curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-05-21 11:59 AM

Me,never thought you would abandon
Me, never thought you could hurt, and
This feeling i can not fathom

Because you were my first,
You were my true,
You were my dream.

And you got to know,
That i could never love another like you
because our love seemed so true.
It was so pure,
It was for sure

I guess it isn't like that anymore
So if u came back
why would i take you back with open arms?
We been going on for months..

Time will heal the pain,
yet it can never erase the love i had for you

And there we stand together,
as lovers,
in time

Because you were my first love,
you were my true love,
you were my dream love.

(wrote this a LONG time ago)..lol..dosn't apply to how i am feeling now

i'm looking for you...always...

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2006-05-29 09:42 PM

it flows VERY well...i like it.

~L

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-05-29 09:48 PM

Hey curiouse,

I must admit that when I first saw who the author was on this poem, I was very excited to see what you might write! I'm not disappointed either. Even though, I did think this wasn’t one of your better poems, but since it was your emotions of past days, who am I to critique it?

I also must apologize to you for not posting on this sooner, I’ve been … out of town? I know that I enjoyed this poem a lot, it showed great maturity on your part.

Thanks for sharing this poem with us, I like seeing poems people have wrote about their emotions from before, and seeing how far they have come.
I can’t wait to see more from you, I hope you will post more soon

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scyzoryk_o4
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 36
Canada and Poland

3 posted 2006-05-29 10:05 PM

Hey, I also like this poem. Though these are your past feelings I think the reason why I like it, is because those have been my feelings for the last 8 months and I’m still struggling with these feelings.

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