Abuses part #1- kid in pane

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Teen Poetry #7

Abuses part #1- kid in pane

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-05-17 09:21 PM

We hear your lies
We see you’re not fine
We hear your cries
We see you’re abused

Why hasn’t any one stepped in
To give their advice
To save you your life
To stop it from happing again

They took the hope of light
From out of your eyes
They took your soul
From out of your bonds

It’s not your fault
For what their doing wrong
Don’t let them hurt you
Just walk out the door

Just because they threaten you
Doesn’t mean it’s true
For they can’t abuse you
If you’re not in their hands

*If this is you
   Then tell a friend, a teacher
   Tell some one how cares
   **please tell some one**
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even in the worst of it I still have hope and in the best I hold on and let go when its time.

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-05-17 09:54 PM

I thought it was a very deep piece; that you obviously put in alot of heart into to it. I loved how it had a deep meaning. I loved it.

~TEMPEST~

Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

2 posted 2006-05-18 06:14 AM

Ok uh your talking about people abusing kids right??...ya ok well i totally love that! I love kids and this poem has such meaning for me! kids are like my whole life..so this just like blew me away! its totally....like there isnt even words for it....Exactric....yeah i think i just made that word up...lol but this poem totally rocks!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-05-18 06:59 AM

I think it was not only brave of you to compose this heart warming poem, but very caring about what happens to those around you. Keep on penning and speaking out...you just may reach someone and give them a nudge along.

A pleasure to read you

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

4 posted 2006-05-18 09:46 PM

Thank you for replying. I must say if I wasn’t angry then I was crying when I was writing this poem. And yes it did take more time then the others because of the topic. I wanted both of them to be the best to show that it’s not just another topic its very scary topic and one that need to be dealt with. I just wish I could do more.

*leah

[This message has been edited by aliway (05-20-2006 12:25 AM).]

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