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Teen Poetry #7

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Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-05-16 06:10 PM

Lies are nothing but anger masquerading
And you tell so many that my faith in you is fading
Because your lies turn to selfishness
And you dont care for life
You only care about the price of your slow suiside

Smoke dulls your nerves
But you can still feel it burn
Its the feeling you love to deah
Even though it takes your breath
You love it more than friendship
Because this is what your throwing away
While you slowly die
Day by day

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-05-16 07:45 PM

I really like this. There's some spelling issues, but everybody does that once in while. This really discribes my ex- I've written one about him. It said almost what you have now. But just... don't lose faith in them. Whoever it is, will come along. I atleast got him to stop smoking weed. But weed isn't as bad as cigarettes. That's what he smokes now. I should've had him quit them instead that's what i regret. But other then me just rambling on, keep on writing these poems.

Courtney

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

2 posted 2006-05-18 10:18 PM

i really like your poem. i just wish that all people would stop smoking and stuff.

*leah

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