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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

0 posted 2006-05-09 04:07 PM

Blue eyes, and chestnut hair
I can do nothing but sit and stare
She's so beautiful, how could it be
That God made her so wonderfully

She's so innocent
Her beautiful soul
I don't want to
Let her grow

she's as cute as they come
She's as funny as a clown
Her few-teethed smile can
Turn a bad day around

I will love her till death
For she's as lovely as the winter
She's my favorite little girl
She's my beautiful baby sister

This is to my baby sister sadie. The last stanza didnt come out how i wanted it to but oh well!
I love her.

[This message has been edited by bekahlekah45 (05-09-2006 05:47 PM).]

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2006-05-09 04:23 PM

I think that every bit of this wonderful poem is absolutely perfect... because it's all about your feelings and your well-placed love and devotion. Congratulations to you and your family. Enjoy every minute of her growing up...

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

2 posted 2006-05-09 05:24 PM

CONGRATS!!!! awww with this poem i can picture her perfectly. awesome cute!
keep it up

~nora <3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

3 posted 2006-05-09 05:48 PM

thanks!!

stargal
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since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-05-09 06:21 PM

Hey behalekah45,

Let me first say congrats on having a new member added to your family, that is such a wonderful feeling, i know that without my baby sister my life wouldn't be the same...
In fact i'm going to china this week to get another new sibling, so i know exactly how you feel!

Awesome poem though, i did like the first stanza a lot though, to be honest i enjoyed the whole thing, but that could be because of the subject...

Great job on this one, i wish that i could find the words to express how i feel about my siblings, but i never can put what i feel about those i love into understandable words... i'm glad you have the talent to do so

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bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

5 posted 2006-05-09 06:27 PM

Thanks stargal! my goodness! all the way to China! thats exciting!!!! be safe ; )

Sweetpali08
Junior Member

since 2006-05-07

Posts 40

6 posted 2006-05-09 11:28 PM

This is sooo sweeeet.....
I loved it.
The last stanza sounded kinda forced but other than that , it was awesome

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

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