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sins_and_tragedies
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 41
england

0 posted 2006-04-26 03:13 PM

i just wondered what i could call this poem any ideas?

maybe I don't like listening to rave
and I'm not on the social mountaintops,
maybe I don't care about the things
that make your worlds twirl,
maybe you look at me and think:
Gee, what a nothing girl.

Maybe I like giving smiles
which seems to be a sin today,
and maybe I allow my imagination
to sometimes run away,
maybe you don't understand this
and that's why you cannot see,
if this make me a nothing girl,
hey, that's ok with me!

The world makes you believe
your personality mustn't be detected,
your face must be picture perfect
and wear cloths just the best, to be accepted.
Maybe I look at you
and feel sorry that you're blind,
robots you have became,
yourself you'll never find.

God made you, as well as me,
this means I am something,
the world is a liar
and if I must be a nothing
for you to see it,

[This message has been edited by sins_and_tragedies (04-26-2006 03:52 PM).]

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

1 posted 2006-05-01 08:26 PM

WOAH!!!! this poem is sooooo awesome!!! loved it!!! its so true. if u wear something that you think is cool, and they dont like it;they'll do that. grr i hate when ppl all look the same. nobody's the same and i dont know when they'r gonna learn that. excellant poem keep it up<3

~nora

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx

AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

2 posted 2006-05-01 09:44 PM

The world makes you believe
your personality mustn't be detected,
your face must be picture perfect
and wear cloths just the best, to be accepted.
Maybe I look at you
and feel sorry that you're blind,
robots you have became,
yourself you'll never find.
the idea behind this poem is awesome, and sooo tru.... maybe a title like "Picture perfect isn't so pefect at all" or A nothing girl to the world, is a real person... i dunno just sum ideas , there not the best but you can work with em....

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

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